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Comment on Diary of a Survivor – Part 2 by Craig

Craig — Wed, 17 Feb 2010 21:51:50 +0000

Thanks for commenting to quickly. STARE was intentional, but THING was not.

And yes of course there is more to come! I’m writing part 3 as we speak!

Comment on Diary of a Survivor – Part 2 by blythe

blythe — Wed, 17 Feb 2010 20:44:04 +0000

typo: a wild-eyed STARE
typo: will make people THINK I’m a girl

Hope there is more to come?

Comment on Diary of a Survivor – Part 1 (updated) by Craig

Craig — Sat, 13 Feb 2010 10:54:50 +0000

Thanks for the comments. I didn’t really edit it since I thought it sounded more authentic as a diary if it was more stream of consciousness. I’ll take another look at it though.

Comment on Diary of a Survivor – Part 1 (updated) by Blythe

Blythe — Fri, 12 Feb 2010 15:19:14 +0000

typo: “drive cards right into it.”
“someone just knocked me” didn’t make sense to me until I read it a few times and realized you meant bumped into. also in the same paragraph it should be affect not effect. And “shit” or “excrement” probably sounds better than “poo” which sounds too childish.
Otherwise interesting story. Makes me want to keep reading and find out what happened and why.

Comment on What are your writing goals? by Craig

Craig — Thu, 11 Feb 2010 09:16:49 +0000

It definately helps. Just make sure not to set your goals too high. Minigoals mean you will achieve more, and feel better.

Comment on The Spiral Dilemma – Preview by Craig

Craig — Thu, 11 Feb 2010 09:16:10 +0000

Thanks, I look forward to your comments.

Comment on What are your writing goals? by Krista

Krista — Wed, 10 Feb 2010 02:19:24 +0000

I have never tried to set myself any goals, although I certainly should. I find myself planning to “sit down and write today” because I have something in my head, and I sit down and little things distract me, a game, checking twitter, research, or noise, the tv, phone calls… So I get virtually nothing done.

Perhaps I need more discipline in my routine, and indeed make it a routine.

Comment on The Spiral Dilemma – Preview by Serrghi

Serrghi — Wed, 03 Feb 2010 10:50:43 +0000

Your book looks interessting, I’ll check out the preview soon! Looking forward to it

Comment on Healthy drinks? by Craig

Craig — Thu, 14 Jan 2010 22:20:50 +0000

Well I don’t feel like I’ve gained any muscle :p

Comment on Healthy drinks? by Kurina

Kurina — Thu, 14 Jan 2010 22:15:30 +0000

Remember, muscle gain will also cause weight gain, but obviously it is not a bad thing. Muscle is good for burning the rest off!

As for drinks, I focus on water as well. I do have the occasional soda, but I am more conscious of it now and try to not have more than one every few days.

Additionally, even if both have sugar, orange juice should still be a good option, unless it has additional sweeteners added to it. Natural sugars from fruit are far better than processed crap in drinks.